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Souls

Shouting with shrill ambition
Around a mandatory eternity
Observing nothing
Options thirsty
Finding only wind
Closed to favorability
The quenching sky is filled with petioners
The sun figures subsided indulgence
Majestically cracking Earths shell
The price of effortless questioning
Beaming minds grieve
Beyond the unanswered reality
Payable only to the universe and
carelessly free

Author notes

Pretty colors, very hypnotizing...http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg

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  • aboomer silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Lovely wording and images! I liked it all, but especially the line,

    'Options thirsty'
    - great wording and image there!

    thank you for the nice entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • quack silver member
    December 3, 2007
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    this is good auntie
    i love you