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Princess

They took my life.
  My fairytale ending.
Why do i have to witness this?
I wanted love.
L
  U
  S
    T.
Shall i ever enjoy this.

World full of lovers, and sinners.

I only wanted a taste.

Author notes

I kind of wrote this in a jealous rage..
It was stingy of me but..meh..
lol.
It was a bit ago..

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  • inspired torture
    December 14, 2007
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    well done, n i have one advice for u read for a well known author "esra pound".... take my advice n tell me what u think... he really inspires me with his short but plentiful; poems...

    World full of lovers, and sinners.

    I only wanted a taste.


  • TaintedBeauty
    December 6, 2007
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    Wow, this is definitely interesting and I like it a lot. I love the spelling out of lust as a separate line for each letter. It adds a sort of...finality to the poem. I love how you allude to you being a sort of princess, who's innocence is destroyed by something more powerful than yourself. This was short, but very very thought provoking. Very nice!