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It's Been So Long

The snow is lined up outside
On the road, she waits to get out
It’s been so long, when she last was here
He was alive. But still she waits
And the snow piles up outside
Like the winter raindrops of her tears.

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  • Beverlynohime
    December 3, 2007
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    This is a beautiful and sweet poem. I really loved it. ^-^ Thank you for your entry!