A trip on the tipsy side
Drowning sorrows from the outside
Sip that anxious bite
Inhale that snuff from the inside
Transform that pipe
Till it turns into the sweetest paradise
Burn an endless pit
Building new ambitions to sit
Revenge in a form
Terror off at a horrendous storm
A light to fixate a dream
Creeping in soundly removing the seams
Brittle Veins Collapse
As the Sensational high makes a pass
Screeching in and out
Furious gasp of all truthful doubts
Body feeble as it warps
Lifeless, OD’d, Fragile, remembered corpse
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My boyfriend is against this... i live with him so it is dangerous for my relationship
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If he is against it then you should be
Often when people write of their addictions they read but dont hear the warnings within. Please do try to stop and dont make your poetery yopur legacy without a voice .Its so sad what I have witnessed with my nephew and he to this day goes back but he has had every bone crushed in his face .He has ulcers in his stomach eating the linning and he has to wear a belly bet to keep his stomach from popping out its so terrribly painful he is 34 but look like 54 and has everything in the world to live for .Two wonderful children that have graduated for him and the oldest boy had his hand blown off and lost his right eye while cleaning a garage for some people and they had a pipe bomb in the garage the boys didnt know it . He has lived through that and graduated as well so why cant people that have everything find the way to stop drugs its truly sad
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If I had everything I could tell you why ppl who have everything do it.
I think that the main source of reasoning for doing it is to ease the pain or emotions we just dont wish to have anymore
they drown it out for the time being but it really isnt a safe thing to do And I do realize that.. Its just there when I need it... I guess its also wanted because its relyable though, yes, it does more damage then help
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Very nice rythm to this write. Thank you very much for entering
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LIQUID LIFE PLEASE READ
I thought that this one would fit simply because the mix of colors reminds me of a stoner time when no matter how much your life seems to spiral out of control you still see the beauty in the colors that surrond
I hope you enjoy....
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Haha I love this. How is it dangerous for your relatinoship compared to anything else, though? lol. If anything, he's the danger now. I'm voting him mostly clingy and most like to kill his wife. It's not a good combination. lol.
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