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Endless Love


We found ourselves lost,
in each other's eyes.
Holding hands we leaped,
falling forever as our emotions
enveloped us, forming a bond
of endless love.

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Prompt: A Moment
25 Words of less

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    That precise moment where you know it's love, lingers for a lifetime. You captured the essence of that moment well with this poem. I wish you the best in the contest.


    Much Love & Happy Holidays ♥

    Renee


  • Danna Hobart
    December 4, 2007

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    Reminds me of that song by Tiffany, or was it Debbie Gibson? "I get lost in your eyes, and I feel my spirit fly..."


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    This is very nice, my friend! It only takes a moment to acknowledge what the heart yearns for and has dreamed of I wish you the best of luck in this contest!


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    December 3, 2007

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    this was very beautiful honey i think you did a very great excellent job wit this good luck

    jewels


  • michichoeret
    December 3, 2007
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    great

    very concise
    liked the emotion enveloping image

  • Suzanne Dia
    December 3, 2007

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    This is really sweet.

    Ah, I miss that feeling, the falling in love and nothing else matters.

    Thank you for entering.

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