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A Moment Of Love

Happy ever after
Serenity is it all
You make things meaningful
You ensure that I don't fall

Love
Heart
No longer
Apart

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    First off...I love the name Zoey. I want one of my children to name their daughter Zoey.

    This reminds me of the day I got married. That moment is etched in my mind and your words took me there.

    The best to you in the challenge.


    Much LOVE & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • Danna Hobart
    December 4, 2007
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    Lovely.

  • Suzanne Dia
    December 3, 2007

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    very sweet
    makes me think of wedding vows
    maybe the moment you're actually married




    thanks for entering.