There isn't much to say tonight
I think I said it all before
Thanks for leaving on the light
And unlocking the front door
You kept the cocoa warm for me
How did you know I'd be cold?
The flower petals, from what I see
Must mean that you're feeling bold
I'll follow the trail you left tonight
I know it won't take me too long
To find the end where you're in sight
To sing with me our "Goodnight Song"
Author notes
TearsForFearsLover
A contest entry
- The End of..... by Anna Emkah.
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Comments
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Very sweet and heartfelt. It touched me. Wonderful wonderful write. Best of luck
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A very sweet and romantic song. You, following the trail made by flower petals through the night, where you find a house of which the door is unlocked and the cocao is still warm. Lovely write. Very well done.
Anna.
PS. And that baby picture completes it all.
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