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consumate

grasp my skin

take my throat

inviting flesh

taunts you still


anticipation urges

thrust my loin

feel the throb


kisses tear me

breath overcomes

wait no longer

caress my breast


sense my warmth

take all

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prompt: seduction
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  • andie11
    December 12, 2007
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    ok,

    the only inspiration i got from this was one of sexual desire! not a bad 1 though, lol


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    oooh . yes take all,,,thats the key to seduction ,,thank you for not holding back ..good luck

  • Gott ist tot
    December 3, 2007
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    Passionate piece here Quickie contest or quickie quickie?
    Good luck.
    Thanks for your comment.