What the fuck were you thinking?
Oh, I think I know, old man, slathering
the screen with your youth, misspent,
spilled as useless and unknown as urge
to merely please yourself.
Please, you could have spared me
your quick mop-ups.
I could already tell by your pathetic
plain character that you had no one
to touch, but yourself.
Author notes
Sorry.... someone sent me a nasty email, to which I sent it quickly back to his wife.
prompt: 2. Epilogue of Unfaithfulness
10 lines
My bad!
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT by penman.
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Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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So close to truth it hurts. Life never goes in a straight line or there would be on diversions like war, hate and unfaithfulness. I guess maybe Love goes in a straight line? Maybe? Does Love go directly to God's eye? To God's heart? To the place of peace?
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Almost...
made me choke on a cheez-it! hahahaha....your poem then author notes. hahahah...that's telling whomever. Excellent write. hahaha...Don't mess with the Master Blaster, just thought of it.
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You Go Girl!
Don't be sorry, I'm glad you sent it to his wife!
"Please, you could have spared me
your quick mop-ups.
I could already tell by your pathetic
plain character that you had no one
to touch, but yourself."
Not your bad, His!
~ Nicky♥
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