The nights have been long without you, and you
As dreams I create alone do not have
The fire and energy of those created by us
Watching through the window as you kiss
Watching me watching you pleasing her
And you tease me by her teasing you
And I know that every sigh is mine
Every drop of sweat, every waft of smell
Every shudder of ecstasy belongs to me
Even as I am here, watching through the window
You gift me your open self, without reservation
And we share the brutal wait of anticipation together
I see the look exchanged between you
The look that says it is time to call him
And I come to you to complete the circle
We become surrounded by a bubble of bliss
As my heart has room for all of us
As it pumps hard and rhythmically for three
Author notes
If you have to ask...
then you are not thinking of the right "window"
In a list
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is truely a heart warming description of the heart where you defined the story of the love in melodious words ..this is a sweet poem touching the sentiments of the true lover here descrining the scenario of the loveful heart..I love this piece..you did a wonderful job here..thanks for sharing this write..well done...
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VEry hot and sensual!~ sounds like a webcam, as it can take us to places we would never imagine...
I need some ice water!
blessings,
Michelle
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I was talking about messenger, but that sounds fun, too. What's your messenger name?
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OH!
lol
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Oh, yes the WWW, window to the world via cyberspace...how did we ever survive? You are too clever for the masses, m'dear.
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Bout time somebody figured that out! Thanks.
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hehe...I'm so smart as in ass..lol
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Yes indeed the pain,sorrow, sadness....can defiantely be felt.
well done and best wishes to you
tory
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its so beautiful. i am around few who have words such as yours are. i feel your pain and know your longing in this poem.
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This is such a beautifully sad piece of poetry. The imagery is emotional... the love you express beautiful.
A total pleasure to have read this beautifully sad piece full of hope.
Thankyou for sharing
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Oh most excellent!
Wonderfully worded and created
Wishing you all the very best in this contest! -
No need to ask, this speaks loud enough!
Nicely written. A mixture of inner pain and pleasure all together.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
intense...
I won't ask... I'll just make some popcorn and join in the watching through the window...
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Beautiful and I feel the sadness from you watching your love with someone else.
Love,
Amera♥
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