To seek you is what i desire
but forgetting you turned out the worlds biggest liar
you told me things that i believed
not knowing that at the end you would deceive
telling me things that you did not feel
left me heart broken no time to heal
bitterness left in my heart to hold
not knowing these feelings would leave me cold
a shadow of great doubt i hide behind
i thought you had a soul so honest and kind
i was a fool to let you in
cause people like yourself only know how to commit sins
you never was worthy of any of my time
shame really that hurting me was your biggest crime
no shame at all do you hold at thought
telling dirty lies even when you got caught
one day you shall pay for the love to took away
and then at ease my soul shall lay.
Please tell me what you think
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i wrote something like this before and dedicated it t osatan the father of lies and told him that i would never listen to him or his words anymore , i took a stand and held onto gods hand , i feel like this is very sincere and heartfelt and came straight from your heart and thanks for sharing this and your feelings
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Writing about pain caused ...
by deception, is a sure way to heal. Poetry is indeed self-therapy for most. For others it may be a form of art, cultivating the gift they have. I am touched by introspective poetry and that instigated by loss, like you have penned here, to bring me into contact with real sorrow. In a way it eases my own.
Thank you, Precious.
Myra
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really awesome & thanks
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AWSOME!!!!!!!!
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fav part - To seek you is what i desire
but forgetting you turned out the worlds biggest liar
least fav part - none
wow this is a really good poem i don't think good does it justice i think fucking great does. this is a awesome poem this really in ways somes up my realtionship with the girl i love i lied to her & well her feelings are really summed up in this poem. i know you don't need to be told this but you are a awesome poet & well keep up the great work
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