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The Ghost....

Listen to the story of a girl that I once knew

As scary as the story is I swear this tale is true

With a bottle of pills in one hand a razor blade in the other

A white towel laid on the floor where the blood would cover

She cut slow and deep just to feel the pain

Shhh, be quiet if you listen you can hear the calm before the rain

Haunted by that tainted day each and every year

She captivates my soul for now I live in fear

Many say you can hear her cry from the ocean to the coast

Some say that she didn’t die that she’s a living ghost

As for me it’s hard to believe as the days go by

The scar is there but maybe the girl never really died

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the rose

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  • Laura
    December 9, 2007

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    this is a great poem although the writing is a little bright for my poor failing eyes lolol great poem love it xx