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Kiss...

Kiss...
Without noise!
Leaves in breeze!

A contest entry

Enjoy a few lines about Kiss...

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  • daviscth silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    This almost feels like it should be said in a whisper! Thanks for posting . I do enjoy all the short pieces because they are hard for me to do.

  • Mercury Rising
    December 17, 2007
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    Short and sweet and a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest.

    David


  • Sonja
    December 15, 2007

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    Just wonder why nobody commented this poem. It has a very deep and sensual meaning, all captured with only few words. There is no philosophy, it's only love. Great.
    ~Sonja~