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Beyond the Pale Blue Sky

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Have we lost our gatherings

of angels among us, seen or unseen,

after all these long years?

Have we forgotten

their tender mercies,

their gentle tidings,

their keening for us all,

even amidst the discipline

of Time's meanderings,

adrift in starlight?

It is not for us to say,

to determine what Life holds

in its reserved embraces ~


it is only for us to observe

and hope to interpret

with lingering language.

We can only accept circumstance

and try to change it,


learning to supercede

its efforts and effects

as best we can,

understanding the limitations

and imitations of survival's wrath,

its nobility

and mobility of sudden charm.

We attempt admiration,

an acknowledgement of Grace

when it appears on the horizon,

just as the sun sets

within a distant dream...

 

 

 

 

Author notes


Art: "Her Favorite Book" by Pino Daeni

My own quotation:

"Poets are keepers of the gate, the last line of defense between survival and living.
It's a task of honor to be splendid voices of culture, unerring disciples of love,
awestruck apostles of compassion."

 

Quotations to inspire, provided by Kari Kennedy:


"Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash."
~ Leonard Cohen

"Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. "  
~ Kahlil Gibran

"A poem is never finished, only abandoned. "
~ Paul Valéry

"Poetry is a packsack of invisible keepsakes."
~ Carl Sandburg

"To see the Summer Sky
Is Poetry, though never in a Book it lie -
True Poems flee. "
~ Emily Dickinson


Quotations courtesy of transcendental baby:

"If I read a book
and it makes my whole body
so cold no fire can ever warm me,
I know that is poetry."
~ Emily Dickinson

"A room without books
is like a body
without a soul."
~ Cicero

"The poet can only write the poems;
it takes the reader to complete the meaning."
~ Nikki Giovanni

 

This poem was put on display in February at the VanCouver Public Library

for the World Poetry Celebration 

 

 

 

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  • just rob gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    wonderful...


  • Utok Bulinaw
    December 7, 2007

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    Absolutely profound Wanda. There was a time when I stopped believing in angels, only words like these and people like you that makes me believe in them once again. You do not only breathe beauty and light in your words, but hope and wisdom too. Thank you for writing this, sweetie. R

  • silverfish
    December 6, 2007

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    a master crafting of verse from an artist with all the tools of poetic language at her finger tips, but i take issue, softly, with the theme of fatalism in the piece and in life. i would aver that the human experience is enriched when we do more than "observe and hope". you cannot "accept circumstance" and then "change it". it's one or the other. in writing, as in the world, i think it's best not to encourage the passive tense too much. "Grace" i acknowledge colors the human experience, but i see it not as an image of a setting sun, but of the dawn. (i accept that a sun setting in a dream may mean the dream is giving way to an awakening). regards, -redfish


  • Mad Moon silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    I stopped in to read this a day or so ago, and was so taken aback by the beauty and the depth of meaning it contained, that I had to roll it around in my mind a while before I attempted to make any kind of meaningful comment. I'M STILL STUMPED! My goodness, woman... ...this dives right into the depths of the soul. The beginning questions existence itself, in so many ways, and how we have strayed from what really matters in our lives. So far gone into the "material world," that we have forgotten what's important. This work continues to rap us on the brain, as we read, too! Beautiful metaphors, rich language, wonderful alliteration.... in other words...Amazing poetry!! Masterfully penned, dear one, as always is with your work. No wonder i love it so... Brava!!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    December 3, 2007
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    Excellent poem, excellent quote.

  • Bad Bill
    December 3, 2007

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    Having read this, I know there are angels among us. A beautiful poem written by one of them.

    Bill

  • Rowan gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    wow~ fabulous quote my friend~ wow.
    And a more than stunning write.

    You are amazing sweetie.


  • kaibab silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    There are always angels...and in their subtle innocence we think them hiding, until eyes sighs into the obviouse, this air that moves in feather brushing cheek....lovely scribe of softer whispers weaving soul


  • transcendental baby gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    Martin Heidiger (so I can't spell) said that poets are the shepards of language ... I like your angels at the gate better You're a wise woman, Lady Blue


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 3, 2007
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    Ah, such angels I know, you know, we know.... and grateful for them, am I. Beautifully penned....


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    This is beautiful... so much light and hope here. I needed to read something like this and to know that our efforts to bring love and light are not wasted... there are indeed an angel in this poem and you wrote this with the soft chalk of the heart. Loved this one - as well as all the quotations you have here, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette

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