Welcome to the world
Of liquid dreams,
Misty thoughts....
Hold my hand as I tour you through
Steamy caverns,
Mysterious forests...
Let me guide you through
The land of
NeverBefore,
The land of
Water in mourning,
Hidden forests...
The land where
Dreams
Are
Dreamed...
WELCOME.
Author notes
I did my best to capture the very ESSENCE of the picture, find where my OWN thoughts were hidden in the picture. I hope I did a good job,
Vivien
PS. I am eleven years old, just wanted to tell you, might help with the judging
A contest entry
- Delightful Golden Beauty Picture Prompt. #2 by delightfulmess.
525 points, ended December 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
Comments
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Oh you have done a excellent job with this pic..
Well done and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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hmmm you probably get this a lot, but you write beautifully for being eleven! The imagery is so calm and full of relaxation but it has a certain air of mistique that only dreams can convey!
I'm 13 and I wish I could have written like that at 11 ^^ great piece!
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