In Aphrodite's image,
she weeps bitterly for her lost love,
shedding tears like stars glistening in the midnight -
beauty aches in the darkness of her hollow soul,
longing for her heart's return.
A contest entry
- Diamond Tears by amaranthine lover.
373 points, ended December 6, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critique?
Comments
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Nice job well done, I think that you captured the essence of the prompt profoundly well, thanks for entering and please keep on writing
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that was really good
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