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Father Creator of all

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It is written,

in the beginning, the creation of man.

No strings were placed upon the arms and legs for a reason.

 

It was "not" puppets he intended to create.

His intention was to mold from the earth beauty and strength.

A reflection of God's determination and love.

With one breath from his mouth we were heart beating and alive.


 Ancient scriptures do say a time came when man and woman

ate from a tree of life changing their fate, losing their innocence.

 

Many have asked if this story is true, or simply a metaphor

of goodness versus evil. 

Why is it god would allow his children to suffer so?

The answers are buried deep within us, each one of our hearts,

bitter to taste,

hard to swallow.

 

It is truly up to us, as single beings, individuals,

to struggle powerfully in life.

Reach out personally,

make a difference in each other's lives.

WE bear the sorrow,

the decisions that each one of us makes,

when deciding how life will be cherished, disgraced or celebrated. 

 

Do I turn a deaf ear, when it is "not" my child who suffers?

 

Has it become only "trauma's and headlines" that catch our attention?

 

What honor do I give to assist or change the laws of our homelands?

 

Do I care if I miss the national elections? Does my single vote matter?

 

How important am I really in the BIG picture of living, will my life really

make a difference for others?

 

Why is it 25% of the workers in charity do ALL the work for the rest of us,

the 100% whole.

 

You ask the most tender of questions. 
Is it really that he allowed this to happen?

We his creation, his men, women, boys, and girls

were all somehow a  witness in allowing darkness to grow...

not lifting up our voices and demanding solutions and justice.

Did we see the warning signs of this young man who violated her,

did we become smug believing that it could never happen to one of us!

 

My dear poet, evil, the darkness is all around us, it is up to us to "expose" it.

 

I reach out to you today, struggling powerfully to find the right words to

help you understand, that a single candlight exposes the darkest of dark,

and that candlelight

is

each

one

of

us.

 

Thankyou for reminding us, to burn bright, and not think that "IT"

is none of our business, look away, not get involved...

that is what FEAR tries to say "not" your loving God. 

Faith requires Action are his exact words.

Discovery is what the dark, and those who feed upon it fear the most.

 

Thankyou for turning on the light this day. You have truly made a difference. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 


 

 

 

 

Author notes

It is important that we break through, give ourselves time to heal when /if tragedy, horrors happen.

We do need each other, and when we woefully put off
the really hard decisions...it does have an affect on ALL
of us-direct and indirectly.

Cruelty and rape against children is an absolute horror,
and this poet asked to understand in a spiritual voice.

I hope this helps to answer the questions you ask,
it is... dear one up to each one of us to STOP this.
God did not allow this to happen, a bolder poet would
say...we did. We have got to address mental illness
and the chains of violence, addiction by more than
throwing them in the streets homeless or temporarily confining them in jails already overcrowded, with
very little effective treatment.
May I never get to weary to lose hope or belief in
Father God, or each other.

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  • melphleg gold member
    December 17, 2007
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    Some good points. There seems to be a consist theme in the entries in this contest. That it has been our fault since the fall. You also raise some good questions such as what are we going to do about it?
    One correction: Adam and Eve never ate from the tree of life. They ate from the tree of knowledge of good and evil.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    Excellent write indeed

    It truly is up to each and everyone of us to look out for each other and most definatly for our children in this world .


  • Poesing
    December 5, 2007
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    Good luck in the contest! This is a powerful write and worthy of a trophy of some kind!


  • A n o n y m o u s
    December 4, 2007
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    I really Like this poem!

  • HighRise Dusk
    December 4, 2007

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    wow, your poem is deep. as i read i felt an energy or maybe a ray for hope in your poem. it makes us see how we do matter, even if its a little bit. its makes us know that as children of God should at least help others in a way, even if it is small. Action is what we need, and your poem yells it loud and clear. thank you for a beautiful poem and i wish you luck in the contest.


  • duana
    December 3, 2007

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    ate from a tree of life changing their fate

    I believe the consequences from this are still being carried out.

    This is brilliant. Thank you for such a thoughtful well written touching entry.


  • stavykm gold member
    December 3, 2007
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    Oops Forgot

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  • stavykm gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    Brilliant Write

    Wow you made my day. This write is excellent and hits so much!! Yet this poem is simple as well. Just take ACTION as you say in your poem. Yes let the light shine so darkness can be revealed and dealt with. I could not agree with you more. An excellent poem to feature. I'm so grateful I clicked. I saw your name and went, oh I want to read one of her writes. Thank you for being so bold and straight forward for the world and society on the reality of truth.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • poetryality silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    Dearest Poet,

    You have spoken in the voice of righteousness this day... into my spirit all that need be said is written in this masterpiece of TRUTH!

    Does God have breasts? It is up to us to feed the hungry, look after those less fortunate, decide, within ourselves if we will sit idly by and witness atrocity after atrocity and do nothing. God works through people(s), young, middle aged and elderly. He worked His miracles in my life through a saintly grandmother that never spoke His truth above a whisper. He spoke into my life through parents that demanded we respect EVERYONE! Even in all of this, wickedness was relevant, simply because we allow it in.

    Your epic poetry has set me in a tailspin, as I know that far too often I do not do what "Thus saith the Lord". If we as believers would wear the yoke of loving-kindness in all that we say and do, shine as the "candle", and kindle fires of hope in all that we encounter, what a greater difference that would make in the ways of the world.

    I commend you for this prolific work, and can surely guess that some will still be unable to reach past the blight of broken-hearted, and down-trodden spirits, to see the flame that you've ignited. There is always hope, there should be constant faith but "charity" (Love), is what is needed today and forevermore.

    Thank you for these words. Your questions ring out as if they were the trumpet to let us know the forthcoming of the risen Christ.

    BRILLIANT!

    I wish the best in this comp!


    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee


  • lindaburns gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    This is a hard read and it tries to answer the hardest of questions. Favorite part? You'd be kidding. Right? God knows we are going to ask Him about this. I wonder how surprised we will be at His answer.
    Three Applaud dudes for guts.

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