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Boredom

I wanted to write a poem
before the day was done,
so I decided to write anything
and this is the one.

I've played video games
until my brain fried,
but nothing killed the boredom
that was eating me inside.

I've wasted away on deviantART,
and try as I might,
I've also thrown time away here,
right on this site.

An obsession with Wikipedia
has killed time as it may,
and it's dead on the floor,
bleeding as it lay.

[I feel sorry for Clockwork
because he's the Master of Time
and Wikipedia has killed him,
but killing cartoons isn't a crime.]

I'm mindlessly sitting here now,
staring at a computer screen,
typing up the most awful rhymes
anyone has ever seen.

I've done all that I could
to keep boredom from growing,
though the more typing I do,
the more it is showing.

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  • Brown-Eyed-Wolf
    October 15, 2008
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    O_O

    BEST POEM EVA!!!!!


  • Evb
    December 2, 2007

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    [I feel sorry for Clockwork
    because he's the Master of Time
    and Wikipedia has killed him,
    but killing cartoons isn't a crime.]
    ----------
    I completely agree.


    • Misfortune
      December 2, 2007
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      I knew you would.


      • Evb
        December 2, 2007
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        I know, I'm predictable when it comes to Danny Phantom.


        • Misfortune
          December 2, 2007
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          Me, too.

          Danny Phantom is my anti-drug!! xD


          • Evb
            December 2, 2007
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            Cause he's hot like that?


            • Misfortune
              December 2, 2007
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              No.

              'Cause I'm frigging stupid and have nothing else better to do than watch cartoons. xP

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