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A Christmas Wish

Dear Santa,
I only wish one thing this year
deep down inside i know its more
priceless than any gift you could
give in the world It may not be
such a big thing to you, but for
me it would be the greatest gift
He means more to me then time itself
I only wish to be with him for as long as
time will allow even if its just for a few
minutes you see he makes smile, he makes me cry
and makes me wish i wouldn't die
I think hes one of gods greatest creatures
he has a smile that could judt sweep me off my feet
His voice so soft but speaks the truth
His eyes just lose me in a different world
His touch just makes shivers go up and down my spine
So you see santa my only wish is to spend
as much time with him because people like him
come only once in a life time I hope you can grant
me this Christmas wish

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  • Jake Wesley
    December 25, 2007
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    fantastic! i know what you mean.


  • punkbliss
    December 19, 2007
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    nice i know wat this is about gee sway i wish i could write like that


  • mirrorlietome
    December 5, 2007

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    really good

    this is really good for your first.
    i can relate to this completely.
    keep writing, i look forward to reading more.
    =]

  • punkedsway
    December 2, 2007
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    Chirstmas Wish

    Hope You like It was my first one