What I wouldn't give
to spend one day
as Peter Pan
knowing that Tinkerbell loves me all she can.
Finding a love like hers
marks the everending cycle
of what true love is supposed to be
no longer blind and cannot see.
Opening a heart to love so strong
Regardless of whom Wendy really is
to seal such a promise with
just a little kiss.
Tink follows
and loves with no avail
I don't guess poor Peter Pan
could ever really tell.
Author notes
Tinker Bell's Tears
In a list
A contest entry
- ~*Quickie PIF with Options*~ by TwilightDazzles.
525 points, ended December 3, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Rhyming might be forced had to use only 40 words
Comments
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cute
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Nice job on this. The rhyming doesn't seem forced at all. Excellent work and congratulations on the honorable mention!
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A cute little ditty!
Glad to see it won honorable mention; this was so sweetly written
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This is very Cute. Good luck with it in Cascading Sakura's contest. you'll probably get brownie Points
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So cute. Now I know why you wanted a pic of tink! I wanted to be her when I was young...that was my favorite movie for the longest time. cute poem btw.
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awwww this is so cool nice job bro!!!
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Terrific
This is just terrific. You have a gift, my friend.
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wow
this is really good, you portray the lvoe between really well great work
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That's awesome that you could portray her love for him so vividly. Great write!
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Cute Picture
That's some awesome poem you penned there. I could see color in the ink. Always been a fan of Peter pan myself. But don't tell anybody hahaha...Thanks for sharing.
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So Sweet
Aaawww Joel this is such a purely innocent heartfelt write... such desire to get that pure love... you've penned a very well thought & written poem that flows flawlessly like a gentle breeze caressing heart and soul... this I think is a winner, but still good luck in the contest... take care & hope you find that love in your life just by being you - sweet tender natured person as you are... Minoo
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I love tinkerbell. Peter Pan is an idiot.
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Very cute piece you have penned here... So sad that Tinker suffers the same fate as all the rest of womankind.... Unrequited love!!!!
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This is such a cute take on the prompt, and it is so very sad that Peter is so blind. The picture is adorable, I love it I also love the title lol thanks for entering and I wish you th ebest in the contest
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