It started like another wonderful dream
Like one that would last an eternity
I set my eyes upon you again
Drawn by your beauty and presence
I was so full of emotion
I had no Idea how to handle it
Most of it stayed bottled up
Maybe I should have shown more
Faith, Hope, and Love
Faith; a belief without evidence
Hope; To want, To have, The desire
Love; A strong complex emotion,
Delight in the presence of someone
It pained me not knowing if you were happy or not
The thought of you not being happy hurts
I really wish we could have talked,
About what may have been bothering you
But what is done is done
I sit here writing this in the hope that,
You understand what I am trying to say
I thought you may have been the one
I guess I was wrong
Maybe all you needed was a little space
I don’t know, and maybe I never will
I would have been glad to give you some room
I would have done any thing to keep you
The tears seem to be endless
I try to forget about it
But it comes back hitting me harder than ever
I’m not sure what to do any more
The food becomes tasteless and not even worth it any more
Sleeping seems to be a thing of the past
The times when I do sleep,
There is always the pain of knowing that will not be there
There seems to have been that night where I may have not said I love you
The is no good excuse for me not saying it
That was a night of many tears
I asked if I could talk to you after school
Then I had to go
On the verge of breaking down
The thoughts of the days to come rush to me
My heart weeping as more and more of them flow in
I should have said I loved you
If I could go back in time to change it
I would do it at the first chance I got
Wether it changed the outcome or not
I loved you
I may still do
I was never able to be mad at you
But being upset and sadness does seem to reveal itself quite a lot
I believe the love is still there
Even though I know you may never return to my arms
I am still here waiting for your return
Mending this broken heart will not be easy
All we can to do is try
So another dream has ended
Waking up crying every night
Knowing that you may never come back
So, so long and farewell
May you live your life to the fullest
Author notes
“I accept that DP Robertson can be a complete prick when it comes to commenting on something he obviously doesn’t like – I have waived my right to complain to moderators and owner of this site about his help wrapped in thistles type comments on my beloved poetry. Although I believe DP Robertson may have a bitter and twisted side to his nature, he has the right to criticise my doggerel anyway he sees fit with whatever words he chooses.”
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A contest entry
- ANYTHING YOUR LITTLE HEART WISHES TO FOB OFF AS POETRY. by dp robertson.
700 points, ended February 11, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold Anyone? by loveisthemoment.
600 points, ended February 1, 2008, 67 entries
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sweet
thats really good paul your an amazing writter 10X better than i could ever b
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I see an enemy for your lines.
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an enemy?
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wow...the second poem in a row i've read tonight that's made me go weak inside. This I can truly and whole heartedly relate to. This is a breathtaking piece, full of raw emotion, enough to reduce even the strongest man to tears.
It looks as though my contest has two really strong contenders for top spot...this is going to be interesting.
Very best of luck in the contest.
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Great outpouring of emotions.
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Wow. . .That's really good. In the last 4days i went through that 3 times over. Love is a vrey unstable thing. I like how you worded this. It's so . . .so . . complete so perfect in its pain and in it's story.
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Good job on this,You write very good,and I know exactly how you feel.
This summer I went through a really hard time like that,but now I fuond love again.
So it doe's get better.
Great job.
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Make sure your put your authors name in there too, or you'll be kicked out!
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OMG Im Going 2 Cry That Is So Touching Sweet Emotional it's My Favorite! I Give You My All 4 That Poem!
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amazing
its my favorite...
i read it like three times...
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THAT IS SO SAD BUT AN AWSOME POOR OUT OF EMOTIONS!!!!!!! omgosh, i need a tissue...so sad . i still think you guys made an awsome couple. i loved the poem in a hearttearing way...sorry for your loss paulie but there will always be someone better...well most of the time.
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