You stand there telling me how worthless I am
I stand there taking it in
Letting it soak to my bone
Then I slip into my other body
Letting that one take control
A knife appears out of nowhere
Somehow you didn't see it coming
Though neither did I.
I wake up to the red on the floor
Realizing I've done it once more.
I throw the body in the swamp
And move on with my life.
Though when the cops come around asking me questions
It's rather hard to move on
They seem to think it's rather odd
That my mother vanished without any word
Author notes
Love ya mom.
A contest entry
- dark poems by speakno3vil.
308 points, ended December 9, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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whoa that AMAZING
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Feeds that thought we all have at least once in our lives lol. Love to see a bit more though... maybe like a reflection of another killing? idk, but great job non the least!
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alright Gien, this was a good in, kinda short though
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook. you scare me. AHHHHH!!
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