I gave you everything I had
Because I thought our love was mutual
I left everything I knew to be with you
Because I thought it was worth it
I cried oceans and rivers of tears
Because I thought it would change things
I told you the truth, doing away with the lies
Because I thought you would think more of me
I allowed myself to bleed at night
Because I thought you would come to your senses
I gave into suicidal thoughts and finally succeeded
Because you told me you never loved me at all...
Author notes
my apologies if it isnt "up to par" I've had writers block for a while and have been trying to get past it. Remove this if it does not equal up to your standards.
A contest entry
- I CLIMBED A MOUNTAIN BECAUSE I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME by Swan song.
1300 points, ended December 16, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Heart by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Anger and hurt is what I feel from this poem. Intense emotion.
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Just so deep and raw with emotion. I like this alot.
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So painful and oh so true, these feelings and things that we suffer because of love, just a piece, how much we die for just a little bit, that happiness from them...
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Intense poem not bad
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Good poem, intense vibes, I like the flow to it. This is something I'm sure everyone can relate to, at least once in there lives. You did an amazing job, and I'd say it's well worth 3 stars.
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thank you so much for your kind words and the applauds.
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