I want to cry for her,
For her sorrow.
I want to cry for them,
For their happiness.
Yet when this goes down,
Something else rises
In need of tears
That don't come,
Tears that haven't come
For a while.
In need of someone
Who
Will
Listen
Yet no one
Will.
Or maybe I'm just too scared to say-
It
Again
For fear of the last time.
A contest entry
- Give me emotions by BonaFidePoet.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Lol. Cliche.
Comments
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This is good Mer, and yes I know it is you. I love the suppressed emotion. When I read it, I wasn't bombarded with serious pain or anything, it was just so... quietly sending a message. Good work.
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Didn't exactly expect to keep you guessing until the end Emma
I'm glad you liked it and that you caught onto the little surpressed emotion thing. 
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