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Young hearts awaiting snow

Hope against hope this eve-
Away, ye stars, away!
Come plump clouds, come and weave
a maelstrom for to stay.
(School lost, we would not grieve
the passing of this day.)

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Option ii- the experience of praying for a snow day.

6 lines of 6 syllables each.

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    December 2, 2007
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    Good work! What a lovely picture this paints. THankyou for entering and Good luck!