A missing part of me
My mother
Left behind in Nebraska
Brown wavy hair
Light Blue eyes
Tall and pretty
But I don’t know her
That makes me sad
Does she love me
Think about me
All these thoughts
Racing through my head
It never ends
Is she dead
Every time I think about it
I want to cry
I want to find her
To get to know her
I’ve been sad for the longest time
Because of this
Now you all know why
I’m so sad
I may never get to meet her
Does she even want to meet me
Unless you were adopted
You don’t know how it feels
Please no questions
It’s to painful
Every time my thoughts start
My eyes fill with tears
Who am I
Someone PLEASE I want to know
Who I am
Who I’m supposed to be
Who is this mysterious women
Missing form my life
I want to know
I want to see her
This has beaten me down
It’s broken me down
I have been knocked over
The wind beaten out of me
Me so headstrong
Has been beaten
I’ve lashed out sadness turned to anger
I’m sorry to those I’ve hurt
I want to run away
To find her
To find the
Missing part of me
To hug her
I know she loved me
But why, why me
Did she give me away
I love her so much
She has a part of my heart I need
My heart is aching
My thoughts screaming
Me crying
I want to leave this behind
To forget but I can’t
I love her to much
No one understands
I want to run
So far away
I want to see her face
To hug her and never let her go
Pain is all I feel
I might never know her
I want to scream till I can’t
I want to leave
Set out to find her
I’m feeling so distant
Where is she now
I want more than anything
In the world
Is to see her
I want to get on a plane
Fly to see her
To see who my mother is
Maybe meet my father
I want to meet the women
I may never know
Please Please
I don’t want to wait
I can’t wait
It causing too much pain
Please
The hole in my heart is growing
Larger every day
I can't take it
The pain
Worse
Please no more
No more pain
Please no more
Author notes
Its about sorrow
A contest entry
- Give me emotions by BonaFidePoet.
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This is a beautiful poem that made me almost cry, to think of the injustice of it all...
GOOD JOB!
Vivien
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Although this is a really deep poem, I'm not so sure it fits into the category of my contest. I am looking for entries that describe why they wish to be a pirate in order to join an rp pirate group. I did enjoy the read though!
Miss Marie -
Filled with emotion and pain...I'm sorry, and I hope you find peace and a rest from pain, I'll be praying for you.
Gloria -
I am sorry. I felt your pain as I read this. Keep your head up and you are in my prayers.
Jade -
My heart is aching
My thoughts screaming
Me crying
This is a typo that slows the flow of the poem. I'm sorry, I know that you hate when I criticize...
THIS POEM IS SO GOOD!! You're venting but in a poetic way, and you made me sad, which is what you're supposed to do. This is so good, and I'm really sorry about how you feel. I wish I could give you 100 de million clappy peoples but I can only give three.
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Absolutely emotional poem Leigh - You already know what I think of this. I'm really sorry about how you're feeling right now, and i'm gonna try to help
In terms of stucture, this is very nice. I love the line spacing, and the emotion just stabs and makes you want to cry. Very very very good job!
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