the little green sphere
so delicious to eat
each little pea
gives you such little meat
wonderful from the pod
frozen or from the can
good on scalloped potatoes
with a few chunks of ham
i guess what im trying to
say about peas is
That they are the veggie
That definitely pleases.
Author notes
i decided to add a little fun to my poetry, hope you like it!
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I love peas, so of course, you made me hungry. I love the fun that you put into this write. Great work!
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I HATE PEAS!!!!
So i found this
FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY!!
the only thing i would change is stanza 3 line 4 i think it would be cooler w/
"or with a few chuncks of ham"
but thats just me it works the way u said it
i like it. ^_^
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Good
This jerks at our funny bone in innocent fun. Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. The imagery and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord of familiarity in our collective memories and hearts.
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hahah this is so cute!!!! i love it, nobody writes like this anymore. keep it up
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thanks! im glad you liked it!
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