She had piercing eyes of magic
that saw into my soul.
I loved that sparkled look of passion
that had me under her control.
It kept me hypnotized like
some wild illicit game.
I followed her into the abyss
of hells eternal flames.
There I found myself cloven
in her lusty aberration.
A subtle angelic host that
wrestled inside my inhibitions.
Burning but not consumed
I basked in her erotic delight.
As she wrapped her arms of
darkness around me nice and tight.
We danced into oblivion
to a beat alien to my ears.
It was those eyes of the devil
that erased all my fears.
We spiraled like water down
the rabbit hole.
As our bodies ignited and
tender flesh unfold.
Like a towering inferno
my heart was ablaze.
As I wallowed in her charms
infatuated and amazed.
One kiss of her lips caused
my complete demise.
Now I'm damed for all
eternity because I looked
the devil in the eyes.
A contest entry
- Pick Your Title by Miyuki.
900 points, ended December 12, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent Dark Write of
perfection at the cost of them eyes. You have just
composed a very beautiful rhyming piece. The balance & flow of the read is magnificent....novy
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Very VEry Berry . . jiji
Oh baby, you gotta be careful with those she-devils they might drive you insane. This was a very fun poem, you played with all your resources,the theme is HOT. And the flow of it was perfect, sensual and at the end she took you away!!!
So, keep'em coming!!
Lots of hugs & kisses
GND
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This was just incredible!!! I loved it and the imagery just popped off the page into your face!!! Well done! I
really love the last 3 lines!!!!
Now I'm damed for all
eternity because I looked
the devil in the eyes.
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awesome! the imagery is astounding! there are some women out there who can literally steal your soul with just a look. Thank God there are others who can buy it back for you!
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