you look up at the sky
in a pure shade of blue
with its immense size
compared to little you
then you look down
to the wondrous calm sea
a mirror image
but how could it be?
which one is earth?
which one is sky?
are those birds or fish,
appearing to fly?
this forces the statement
most famous in theme
Nothing is exactly
just what it seems
do you like it?
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very interesting view. i've never thought of the sea or the air as such. very interesting indeed
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wow!!! look at this hidden piece!! i don't know how i came across this poem. it's so wonderful and contemplative! XD
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Welcome to allpoetry
Nice flow and rhythm. Very contemplative. I like your point of view on that universal theme. Good rhyme and this really gets one to thinking.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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Awesome!!!
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