the ground burns with fire
and I go 2 dealer.
Th blood spill upon this day
so com join the war and stay.
War is all around
now the stain of blood is on the ground.
now listen 2 the shooting
and don' forget 2 duck your head.
I might just blow you away
if you get in my fucking way.
welcome 2 my war
you little fucking bitch.
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Comments
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crudely spelled, it was pretty good.


