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Replaced?

You've replaced me
with another lie.
Another form of adultery
even if we're too young.

A serious relationship
    you don't want,
then why are you?
Twice.
Two times.
Three times.

You feel guilty for doing it
    then why do you keep it?
Replaced.
All of our history is replaced
      with one little call.

Do you notice you're doing everything
    that we used to?
Do you notice that the only difference
    is darkness?

You found the light in me
    the you that you wanted to be.
You found me as your angel
      and now you take nothing I give.

I know what it's like for you
I've been with you through it.
    Darkness is your nemesis,
    but you feel calm within it.
Why?
  Ask yourself one day
  and maybe you'll understand it.

You're not ready to feel it
    - the light.
Wishing to live your life
as it is now.

I will find you.
I will come back to you.
I love you.
But go away right now
    I'm not ready for you.

That's what you're saying
but how am I to be in your life like this?
    When you don't treat me
    like the best friend that you call me.

Author notes

I needed to write this, but I don't wish to get "the other person in trouble" to be completely honest. I mean, I wrote it in order to get it off my chest. And everyone who knows me, knows that I can't get things off my chest without having someone else read it.

It doesn't matter if you understand, the person this is to understands.

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  • RazorCallwind
    March 1, 2008

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    This is great very well versed. the feelings bleed from your words. Pain agony, twisted feelings of betrayal. i understand all to well, you should read Numb, its another of my poems.