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Dellusions

Why
am I
kicked off
the road
that I know best?

Where
did I
go wrong
in my
attempt to help?

It
isn't funny,
so why
is the
world laughing?

Maybe
acceptance is
better than
vengeance,
but I won't let go...

not yet.

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  • celestial
    December 2, 2007

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    :)

    This is a very good write. The conclusion seems to contradict, and I feel that it's this that adds to the zest of the poem. It sucks when one's not accepted when they want to be.