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A Wedding Day's Massacre

Roses are covered thick in gore
as crimson is spilt upon the floor -
white splattered with a mottle of red,
filling all with horrific dread -
as corpses fall on this joyous day,
strewn about in disarray,
all wonder how this could occur -
this, a wedding day's massacre.

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