Of Genius,
There's not much left.
Why be smart when there's no soul?
Lunacy has the right idea.
Of Lunacy,
There's not much left.
Feelings are all I know
I wish I knew something more
Life has the right idea.
Of Life,
There's not much left.
Why live if you can't love?
There's no point to this endless circle
Love has the right idea
Of Love,
There's not much left
Because without the other three,
Why Be?
This circle of wanting, of cherishing
That which is someone else's
You cannot see yourself on this chain,
Only the back in front of you
Maybe that is why
There's not much left anymore.
A contest entry
- Of Genius and Lunacy, Of Life and Love by The Sage.
1000 points, ended December 17, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Mr. Comment Box wants to know what you see on his back! Write a comment here to let him know...otherwise, there won't be much left!
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omfg!!! wow... this is amazing!!!... once again corinne you have left me speachless with your work...loll
~Ginger~
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and i will give you a clapper, cause i forgot to do that. but i will not give you three, cause....oh never mind, ill give you a three.
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Uh...Lovely? Sarah never commented on this. That was me, down at the bottom, replying to Katie's comment. Silly-willy-walnut head.
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OMG! YES SARAH IS RIGHT!!!!! FRUBA!!!! i had to read it twice in order to see what the heck sarah was talking about. but yes!!!! Tohru-kun i love it. the whole rice ball. AHHHH!!!! rice ball or omusubi..or nigirimeshi if you also want to call it that. but still, Tohru-kun i absolutely love you and this poem. its definately one of my favorites now. i can tell you what i see on your back, i see a great person with a great soul, who just so happens to be my best friend and a great writer. luck in the contest!
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HAHAHHA! AMAZING JOB CORRINE!!!! AMAZING JOB! BRAVO!
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I like this, Rin. It makes sense and i love the last stanza.
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*Muah* Thankees for your review, dah-ling. Semi-Furuba inspired, so when Tica reads this she will flip. I'm just waiting for the comment.
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oh would you look at that. wow. i knew something was off when "sarah" said Tica. but i dismissed it. wow am i blonde. you know what must have gotten me? the wolf
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