It comes out of nowhere-a
and strikes Earth with such force-b
Snow falls from the sky-c
Covering anything it sees-d
But look closely at a single delicate leave shake-e
And you'll see one of the most heart-warming sights-f
Resting upon it, is but a single snowflake-e
Author notes
abcdefe-scheme
A contest entry
- Open Christmas Contest by Lionsloves Lair.
1750 points, ended January 10, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is this a good love song?
Comments
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A very pretty winter poem, although I don't understand the abcdefe-scheme you have penned it in...There also seems to be no mention of Tim and your connection with him, although I can relate to him being an individual snowflake, that's because he was unique...Thank you for your entry
~Lilac
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this is beauty in shortness! Love it, love it!
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