Spinning and spinning,
'Round and 'round.
Nothing could ruin this feeling.
Turning and turning,
Not making a sound.
This is the way to be.
In our own little world,
There's no one but us.
Caught in this perfect moment.
A contest entry
- Love? by rsheafer.
700 points, ended December 24, 2007, 23 entries
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1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 20 entries
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600 points, ended January 6, 2008, 10 entries
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300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
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385 points, ended February 14, 2008, 26 entries
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Thank you so much for entering this beautiful poem. This explains the silly feeling we feel when we "don't think" and just fall in love??? Also explains why I have bumped my head more than once. hehehe
Have a lovely valentines day
♥Becks -
Just like the song a moment like this, it's true that moment you've been waiting for for so long is finally there and it's so beautiful. I love the way you expressed this moment.
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Very, very, very beautiful! I agree of this piece
Sometimes in our life we can meet a wonderful person who will want to share our life at its deepest levels, and for all the right reasons AND THE PERFECT MOMENT ....I like to be next
GRACE
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hehehehehehehehe MAX!!!!!!!! so cute and love it!
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Aww! This is great! It reminds me of a wedding dance, or some other dancing experience. Short, simple, to the point--and even the words have a spinning sort of rhythm. Excellent work, and good luck in the contest!
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whoa this is really good! i love it! keep writing you've definitely got something good going here.
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