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The Never Ending Comp


I fell asleep in my chair
when reading my book

and then wandered off

to dream like I should.

I was surrounded by poet's
from long down the year's
who had entered a competition
amongst their peer's.

 

There faces looked ragged

by times beating clock 

and all had been waiting

for the results of this comp.

 

I laughed as they told me

how they all ended up

being caught on this page 

that a Ted E Bare dreamed up...

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Kathryn Bowden
    January 29, 2008
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    I really liked this a lot. It made me smile.


    • Timespell
      January 29, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and actually fonding this one...LOL

      You are only the second person to find it!

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Timespell
    January 24, 2008
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    LOL... I would say it was uncanny that you are the first to read this entry. When you consider I wrote this entry "7 weeks ago".

    Thanks for reading and being the first...lol

    All the best,



    ~T.S~


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    That was hilarious! A contest entry that would answer the contest itself hosted by a crazy Ted E Bare. Defintely great for a chuckle. Of course I love the background. I'm shocked to find I'm the first one to see this and comment. I want to thank you for entering my "The endless contest (or longest contest is more like it)!" contest. This will not be the last time I read your entry. At the minimum, it will be read at least once more during judging.

    Ted E