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Swift Sail In Slipped Night

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My soul is an empty crib
abandoned
as womb denied its wet push

I am child of night, of city;
motherless as alternative methods
of no conspicuous test tube

I am untethered to ties, floating free
and fierce at this far flung
float in unlit search for something hovering
over empty space






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  • PageTurner
    December 2, 2007

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    WOW, These words punched me right in the gut!

    "My soul is an empty crib
    abandoned
    as womb denied its wet push"


    Such Intense Imagery, M'Lady.

    ~ Nicky♥