I have long been a gray cloud
sucking up sad things to cry over
Sad things; gutted in suspended sack
hanging from a lax fist
of a dark browed sky
The sadness in your eyes
breaks my handhold and I am close to spilling
out
a thousand leagues of sea
on your gritty shore
Author notes
ten lines... picture inspired
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired # 4 by cirque du soleil.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Your Soul still shows, M'Lady.
A deep & dark denunciation...
"The sadness in your eyes
breaks my handhold and I am close to spilling
out"
A Masterful Moan, Poet.
~ Nicky♥
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ty Nicky...you are so loyal to my poetry...and I lubs yah for it.
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