Sinking in the abyss
not wanting to exist.
Needing darkness to hide
the terror thats inside.
Ever expanding tension
is to great to mention.
Author notes
Prompt; Six lines, Six words/syllables,
Option iii, You may write a dark poem
Six lines; six syllables per line. This was fun to write, a good chance to describe how I am feeling at the moment.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - Options 6 Lines 6 words/syllables per line... by VoltaicHypnosis.
333 points, ended December 5, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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cool
short but sweet, in 6 lines you got great tension. nice work here
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You pack one Mighty vision in this poem. If you want Dark in 6 Lines 6 words/syllables...Then this has nailed it!!
Good luck to you in the contest.
T.S
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Wow, This sent
little shivers down
my spine..The raw emotion
in this ..sigh..I feel you!
Good luck in the contest!
~Pastel
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This is a great way for a quick release!!
Love the dark!!!!
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Great little snippet good luck with this in the contest
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Nice work!! This one is very good... ah yes, raw emotion seems to alwyas create the best work. Keep it up! Thnkas for entering
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