Touch me,
I turn to dust,
Kiss me,
Burning away.
In your arms I long to be,
Even if it’s only as a memory,
That brings pain,
And anguish,
Turning your life upside down.
Hear me,
In your dreams at night,
Crying your name,
Saying goodbye.
As the sun rises,
And you lay in your lovers arms,
I die over and over,
In your mind.
And now,
How can I be back,
The same as I was before,
While the years have passed,
And you move on.
My fire still burns,
My love still strong,
Leaving a bitter taste in your mouth,
That none can wash away.
Soon enough,
I’ll be gone again,
Maybe I should walk away,
And let you live on in happiness.
Author notes
basically, this was sort of written for an Rp, for my character Lila to Lan... in a way... It's way to late for this...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was great.
The bitter taste in your mouth was my favorite part.
really i nice job well done
lovely emotion

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What's a vamp to do? He's stuck between his love that he incidentally had to murder to save the world and the smexy kitsune whom he has fallen in love with... Grr to death and love!!!
Anyways! You have a beautiful write here, not too long and not too short. Definetely something I would recommend to someone to read, which I may very well do! But anyway, a very well written poem, especially for a somewhat short RP (thus far), and I hope that if you write on this topic again it'll be just as awesome as this one.
Your Vampire,
Lan, AKA Soraslonging, AKA The Great, Illustrious, Powerful, and Unbelievably Handsome Dragon of the West!!!



