I looked for you last night.
I wanted to apologise for the fight.
But you were nowhere in sight.
You didn't answer my call.
So now I get it.
You have kicked me away.
Seems like am no longer fit
To be in your life.
But still I will always love you as your wife.
I chose the rope
Because you always said, "get the rope when you lose hope".
So long then.
See you in the next world,
Where I hope I will be forgiven...
Please tell me what you think
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Ouch! A dark poem, and hope that not one word of it is true! But a very well written poem to be sure... I liked it a great deal, and, yes, quite dark, indeed!!
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Thanks. But don't worry. It never happened.
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Now this one is kind of frightening. I too am glad you chose to write instead of the rope. I world is big wide space, yours to capture. Hope is what keeps us moving forward. Never give it up!
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This was an enjoyable read. You painted a very vivid picture here.
Well done.
Keep up the good writing.
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Ouch!!!
I understand how it feels, but we are much much more than our feelings. I'm happy you wrote the poem, showing you've trascended the temporary crisis. Warm regards, Sultan
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