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Hero

The knight had met Amera long ago    

A princess revered from town to town    

He held her in his heart, he loved her so    

yet there was a war to be fought, and won   

       

Visions of her beauty had kept him alive   

A fiery dragon remained to be slain    

If from this last battle, he could survive    

he would offer Amera his good name    

       

The knight now a Hero throughout the land,   

bringing gifts for his princess- silks and gold   

began a journey to ask for her hand    

wanting her always, to have and to hold    

       

To his proposal it was "yes" she'd said!    

Princess Amera, and her knight would wed

Author notes

This is NOT exactly another tribute! The princess "just happens" to be named Amera! Worked for me...

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  • Today
    March 14
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    nice poem, consistent rhyme scheme and the nattative is good and upbeat. I enjoyed reading this poem.

    Well done, keep it up.
  • Godslayer
    March 14
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    this is pretty good keep up the good work

  • very cute write, and very enjoyable..nice


  • Sinnastarr silver member
    March 3

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    This was an enjoyable read. You painted a very vivid picture here.
    Well done.
    Keep up the good writing
  • Great

    great poem, loved it

  • jcat gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    What lady doesnt love the thought of being a princess?? With her own true knight on a white horse?? I think you did a wonderful job on this and I can't believe this one didn't place in the contest!!!

  • Dark Energy
    December 3, 2007

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    Perfect Story!

    Wonderful poem for a wonderful princess, so sweet she is. You fit the words perfectly into the dream of a poem. I know it was hard writing this. And you will only get better, there are some minor errors with your meter but those are forgiven. Bravo!

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  • Amera gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    This is fantastic! You're a sonneteer and a very good one. Saw your notes; a princess with my name huh? Well thank you so much!

    Love,
    Amera♥

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  • Bob Fox
    December 2, 2007
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    Medevial love

    If my spelling is right. But you weave a wonderful story of chivalry and love. Spendid my dear poet


  • tomisb
    December 2, 2007

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    I have got to laugh. This is darling and cute are not quite the words but I think you know what i mean.

    Love, Tom B.

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