.Some people don't.
.Some people think there fast.
Some people don't.
Athletes are fast.
It's just they're exercisers.
Some kids are way fast.
There you have it.
I'm outta here.
I gotta run super fast.
Some people like running.
Some people don't..
Some people think there fast.
Some people don't.
Athletes are fast.
It's just they're exercisers.
Some kids are way fast.
There you have it.
I'm outta here.
I gotta run super fast.
.Some people don't.
.Some people think there fast.
Some people don't.
Athletes are fast.
It's just they're exercisers.
Some kids are way fast.
There you have it.
I'm outta here.
I gotta run super fast.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under - Mind Maze by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended December 14, 2007, 12 entries
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Cute! I loved the last line where you had to run.Awesome,
Vivien
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I think this is kinda repetitive. Cut out a few lines that say the same thing over again and I think you'll be good. Luck to you in your contestos.
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Great comparisons to this one. Very nicely done indeed :D
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CUTE
Cute very cute! i love the last where you had to run out of here SUPER FAST! lol. very cute poem -
Very cute, short but solid. I liked this piece alot. Great job penning it.
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thanks for the comments.i speedin out
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im not sure if this is a poem about just running, or about something deeper. whatever it is, i like it and its true. nice.
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nice poem! and its true! not everybodu runs fast well good luck on the contest!
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aww so cuteee!! you must run very fast! =]
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You must be super fast. It sounds like it. Anyway nice poem. You express your mind well in it. Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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