Hidden treasure inside
Form a beautiful heart
Many tears you have cried
They've been there from the start
Though it seems heart has died
Sorrows soon shall depart
Author notes
Option 4
In a list
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - Options 6 Lines 6 words/syllables per line... by VoltaicHypnosis.
333 points, ended December 5, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful daddy
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thanks for the reminder. You don't know how badly I needed this! This was beautiful!
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this is beautiful daddy. best of luck in the contest
i love u daddy
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aww this is such a beautiful and short write which is beautifully written. well done and best of luck in the contewst
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This is indeed a poem touching the internal emotions of your soul revealing the yearnings for the smiles in your life..I love the concept of this poem where you are touching the essence of life in the universl flow through your beautiful and heart warming words..Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful verse..well
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daddy this is really good
i love you love rhianna
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A beautiful poem! And you adhered to the rules perfectly. Good luck, fine poet!
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Beautiful treasures can be found in a box. And yes sorrows do depart...wonderful poem. excellent take on the prompt. best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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