Weathered within the realties of life,
yet flourishing within the soil of a
higher existence,
Not understanding why two blood
children only knocked within her door,
Yet as time travels life has been
enriched with many tiny mortals in
need of what she had to offer,
Living within the enrichment of simplicity,
small frills within her walls,
Creates the greatest gift of all, as each
tiny mortal lacking within enrichments,
Finds solitude within the world she lives.
A contest entry
- Invite Only 6 by Laura Lamarca.
700 points, ended December 14, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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simplicity. i love getting away from it all, as is i dont watch tv.. this was well writen, i had to read it twice im not the best reader,lol love it but..
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i love this poem. very beautiful.
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Soft and loving touches surround your poem, and deep expressed nurturing...love this...excellent! best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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It is a beautiful blending of words to reveal such a nurturing soul. Such gift could only reap beautiful rewards. Well done my friend. You have revealed such beauty. Best of luck in Laura's contest. ~Pamela
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What a remarkable person as the centerpiece of your poem, sharing her life to help the young ones given into her care grow. Wonderful descriptions, and feelings of serenity within the world you have shown.
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This is a really good piece.Differant then what you usually see.You chose your wording well.Good luck on the contest.
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