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Driving Through The Snow

Missing image
She straps in tight
anorak with hood
driving safeguards
she observes  real good


Driving through a tempest
Beverly observes
ice beneath wheels
careful do not swerve

Pensive young motorist
travelling for joy
knows the snowy perils
this car is no toy

Chains on the wheels
she observes her terrain
must concentrate young miss
don't have love on the brain








Author notes

I know you arn't driving hehe,, i tried to incorporate the image prompt,,with your secondary theme of snow

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    Perfect job here Peter

    I havent ever driven in the snow but ive had my share of mud and its no fun at all


  • Beverlynohime
    December 2, 2007

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    I really like how you put both themes together and your take on the picture was beautifully done! Thanks for the entry.


  • WhisperingSpirit
    December 2, 2007
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    Good lesson here Peter
    Yes love can distract one of course

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