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Regret

All these games yet to play
And, here, I find one more way
To tear my soul clean apart
There, another has my heart

Of all these songs yet to sing
And I still do fear the ring
I had never meant to hurt
Heartstrings slowly being burnt

I felt your thoughts rest on mine
Far away, thin and fine
Discreet emotions ringing clear
How much happened in a year!

Raging red and tempered blue
These are things I see in you
Golden stars become your laugh
Swirling in a lineless graph

Delayed dreams and broken heart
Thinking that I played it smart
Patience now is running thin
Too many feelings kept within

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Just something that was circling my mind at 5 in the morning.
I don't know why, but I like reading this from bottom to top as much as I like reading it from top to bottom.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 15, 2008

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    awww I'm sorry you feel this way, it's hard to give a heart and even harder when the person you trust with it hurts you...I hope the future is better, least you've learnt what not to accept from someone.