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Deep within my veins

My love for you runs deep within my veins
no other could feel for you the same
I dream of our next embrace
I will be wearing something in lace
Something naughty and exciting
My love for you will always be inviting
Your kiss, your tender touch
makes me love you oh so much
So until I see you again
the key to my heart I will lend

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  • hugh wyles silver member
    July 25, 2008

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    Dear Maryann,

    I think this is a lovely piece of verse and again cannot understand how I missed it. Was there an AP glitch in December so it didn't show up in my 'New by Favourites'.
    Anyway it's only marred by the last line which seems a bit forced and the rhyming is rough (although Ogden Nash used even rougher!)
    Anyway, a lot of people have really missed something if they haven't read it yet. I wish it had been written for ME!! LOL.
    Applause, Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.