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Art Of Love

You walk into the room and I feel your prescence
I turn, eyes meet and my body is electrified,
sparks of intense desire flash through my spirit
this message clear, defining the future.

Embraced within arms that bestow promise of passion
I trace the curves of your face as you move closer
lips gently touch as tongues dance with delight
as sweet kisses move in rhythms so soft.

Deepening with pleasure I am lost to all sanity
as lips throb in unison reaching the core of my being,
our hands move in blissful discovery of what is to come
as I catch my breath in awe of this moment.

Movements of clothes becomes a sensual experience
as layer by layer masks of propriety disappear,
moaning with exultation, transported to cloud nine
this heat that we share ensures unity to come.

As together we join in this art of love
playing hearstrings we venture to paradise,
in rapturous cadence we move to ecstacy
as two rivers flow, becoming one sea.



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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 2, 2007

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    this is so beautiful and is deatailed so strongly with powerful emotions and imagery. well done and best of luck


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 2, 2007

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    This is so very, very beautiful
    I am SUCH the sucker for truly beautiful love poetry and so, this one makes me smile in warm thoughts
    All the best to you!


  • unmasked synergy
    December 2, 2007
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    Cool Alice, real cool
    ~Dd~


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    December 2, 2007

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    Wow this is beautiful honey.... you portray love so beautifully and yep I think the body says more than anything except the eyes I think.... beautiful hun

    Karen